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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN 
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famous country saying.. How can I miss you , when you won't leave? but think of it as.. she won't leave his thoughts or mind... how do I make this more of a love song instead of an insult?? I'm not kidding i really wanna write this song... throw me a bone... please.. (grin) thanks xoxoxo Redwriter1 |
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
How can I miss you? Leave you behind When you won't even Leave my mind? How can I feel you Go away When, in my heart, You're here to stay? I don't know where you'll go to If you should ever leave But there will be no call for me To sit at home and grieve For how could I ever miss you Wherever you may be? For, in my mind, I'll always find You deep inside of me. |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
exactly!!.. that's what I mean!.. thankyou very much.... need to write some more.. ( i mean, I need to write some more).. sounding.. mm.. desparately trying to get someone out of your mind.. but they just ... stick there.. and haunt you.. hard one i know... but thank you for the help.. it's truly appreciated.. nice lines... willl post updates... xoxoox Red |
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