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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-06-11 05:31 PM



A Heart Of Crystal
~*Marge Tindal*~

The rings that adorned your hand
are only a symbol of
the caring heart you wear,
your crystal heart of love.

Do not feel saddened
for the mission of the rings
They are only symbolic
of far more important things.

Your love resides in
a crystal heart of love,
shining evermore,
dusted with love.

The crystal box stands empty, true,
but the heart that misses them
is the crystal heart
in you
.


*Written for a friend who fell on
hard times and had to pawn her
engagement and wedding rings*




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Romy
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1 posted 2000-06-11 10:54 PM


This is so touching, what a beautiful poem!
Your friend is lucky to have you when times are hard!

Our most precious possessions don't always come wrapped in bright wrap and shiny bows!

very lovely!
Debbie

Isis
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2 posted 2000-06-11 11:59 PM


Beautiful Marge, thanks for sharing this, I hope your friend got her rings back eventually?  Still writing her this poem you gave her something else to treasure didn't you?
And thanks for the subtledly hon, I love it  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-06-12 01:52 AM


Debbie~
Thank you for liking ...
Her friendship is one of my most treasured posessions ...

Isis~
Oh, .... Shhh !  Don't tell ...
I went and got them back for her from the pawn shop and put them back in the little crystal box on her dresser.
I convinced her the 'ring Faerie' brought them ... she hugged the 'ring Faerie' and said ... I believe !

*(You're welcome)*
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


brian madden
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4 posted 2000-06-12 03:42 PM


Marge a wonderful poem, very touching. excellent as always.

Do not feel saddened
for the mission of the rings
They are only symbolic
of far more important things

 ------------------------
"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.

manic street preachers
"Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair"

"I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP

"And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity
Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see
And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway
It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper.

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Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-06-12 08:17 PM


Brian~
Thank you for popping in here and
reading my little contribution.
This is where the challenges are met !
I appreciate your read.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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