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Shedding Scale (Isis Challenge)
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana 
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My scale are so glued I can't get them off Even if i wanted too Which i want but not enough i called on GOD please help me and in the back of my mind "i'll go see him again" just one more time to hear more lies using them to spend more time with him and sometime i just can't go on like this and bang zoom i go right back into the cesspool do i really love him that much or am i out of my freaking mind what is going on here the truth shall set me free where is the truth? monique |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is excellent monique. . . I love the last line, "the truth shall set me free, where is the truth?" we've all wondered that at one time or another. . . Well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
O Sven thank you I don't think it is much of a poem I was letting steam out of meathead monique |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Monique, letting out steam or not, this was a wonderful poem, challenge well met hon  I too love and relate to the last line.. I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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