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Why will you not listen to me?(Isis Challenge)
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Insignificant creature that I am, Like a grain of sand in the desert. Unseen and unheard piece of nothing, You tread on me like dirt. I scream to make you notice me But you turn your head away. I am so close to you... Let me come into your heart if I may. Why won't you let me in? I can help you...don't you see? I am right here. Why will you not listen to me? "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Aw ESP this is sad ----how lonely can it get? Well done. Lovely poem. netswan |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
ESP great work!! It hurts when no matter what you do they don't see you, or understand... A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
ESP great work!! It hurts when no matter what you do they don't see you, or understand... A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
ESP, Very nice poem. Your feelings made visual. Your heart opened in this one. Good job. Yes, it hurts! marcy |
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