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Sven
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0 posted 2000-03-28 09:39 PM


THE FIERCEST OF THE FIREY DRAGONS
Loomed before her eyes
Weaving its path of death and destruction
Amid the soldier's cries
With scales of leather
And eyes quite fierce
It could not be killed
No sword could its armor pierce

With sword in hand
She knew no fear
This beast had taken from her
One she held very dear
With a bone chilling cry
She screamed out his name
And ran to kill the beast
This foul hell's bane

As she ran toward the beast
She offered a prayer to those above
"Today beast, you breathe your last breath!
FOR MY GOD, MY COUNTRY, AND MY LOVE!!"

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Isis
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1 posted 2000-03-29 12:43 PM


Ohhh such drama, I liked this Sven!!  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2000-03-29 12:18 PM


Sven...excellent job with the line I left you.  I knew you could do it!!!  This is wonderful!!!  Maybe we could do one together sometime??

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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