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Stephen Jones
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 53


0 posted 2000-03-21 02:12 AM


(There wasn't enough room for this in the reply box)
This is my response to Isis' (ruler of my heart) theme.

Ruler of My Heart

To be ruler of a province
and to conquer land and nation
there must be bravery untold
and stout determination.
High knowledge is required
to sieze his kingdom every part.
And yet I'll crown as deity
the ruler of my heart.
It takes a soul of highest skill
to swallow up the lands,
with shrewdest human wisdom
and dexterity of hands.
High graces must prevail
to reign through war or voice of art.
And yet the son of God must be
the ruler of my heart.


 

© Copyright 2000 Stephen Douglas Jones - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-03-21 01:35 PM


This is an excellent response to the challenge.
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-03-21 08:30 PM


Stephen, Bravo!!  You took this somewhere completely unexpected to me, spiritually. And that is beautiful to see, I too love and appreciate  his love in my heart and life.
Bravo and thanks for the wonderful surprise with this!!  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

3 posted 2000-03-28 07:05 PM


Superb Job,

I loved how your met this challenge

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


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