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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Ok I want some one to make me a poem about the world how it has become and how we're distroying our home...for instance we werent supposed to have cars, and computers and that stuff we were supposed to live off the land and that jive...I want someone to make me a poem about that...I prefer Poet DeVines style of writing How he has words that rhyme and good rhythm , and the same amount of lines in each verse... real picky arent I?? Thats the challenge Dana |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Dazed: I'm not sure how to tell you this but PdV is female...LOL HUGS I love the way I look in your eyes, I'm just me tho'... We are all works in progress, no? |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Rainbow girl what ever gave you the thought, I thought she was male cause I said I loved her work?? I knew she was female her name is sharon...I read her thing on here... She writes good poems but thanx for telling me anyway!!  LOL |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
WHOOPS MY BAD!!! I seen the mistake hehehehehe sorry I was a little offended and couldnt understand why you thought that LOL Missed the s hehehe LOL |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I'll leave it for PDV then, I'm sure she'll love to have a go!! May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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ken Junior Member
since 2000-03-10
Posts 49RI |
Gazing up into the sky I often ask the question why With all the beauty the earth has given With mans distruction, we are still forgiven How long can progress continue to ruin Everything the earth is doing It feeds and shelters us from dusk til dawn Allows our children to be born With every generation experimenting more One thing I know is sure If we continued to live in the past We wouldn't worry if our world would last ken ( is this what you were looking for ? ) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Mother Earth Everybody loves a mother There’s no love of greater worth But most of us do not respect Or show a love for Mother Earth We have all destroyed our planet Some things, irreversible The deeds of those who speak the loudest Often are invisible Each one makes a contribution To the planet’s woeful ails We never take the time to stop And walk prevention’s harder trails Deadly chemical pollution Nuclear power’s accidents Toxic drums are laid to rest Landfill leaks are prevelent But each household in the country Spills pollution of its own Discarding useless packaging We fill the earth with styrofoam We pour our solvents down the drain We grow our grass on chemicals And never once protest the waste We leave that to the radicals Every body loves a mother That’s what Mom is all about But no one loves our Mother Earth For some odd reason, she’s left out Elizabeth Santos |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
WOW both Ken and Elizabeth you two both did great!!! I tried so hard to think of a poem for this cause this topic interests me and saddens me also and I couldnt ever put it in words even though im not that bad at writing poetry... I just didnt know how to word it!! Ya guys both did what I wanted and thanx they are both sad and beautiful poems!! except i would still rather turn back time even though we might not know as much...We probably werent put here to discover the things we did Thanx again you 2 Dana |
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