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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-04-26 07:50 PM

Just a memory from depth of heart
Lost to the moment, ever apart
Left in time of moments ago
Always remembered, this we know

Just a memory of moments we shared
True feelings of one deeply cared
Just a yearning that flowed within
Such a beginning, then a lost end

Now just a memory of yesterday
To another, taken away
Left to ponder, remember when
Lonely in wander, from within

Now just an echo among the trees
Soft flowing air of gentle breeze
Fading footprints in white snow
Lost to memory, now letting go

Now left beside the road of love
Having released this soft white dove
Watching the wings carry softly high
Now just a memory, a tear of eye.

Once a ride upon silver rails
Two shadows embarking those trails
Riding the ribbons swaying true
Now one shadow that once was two

[This message has been edited by Magnus (04-26-2002 08:12 PM).]

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2002-04-26 07:58 PM

a little sad..but beautifully written..enjoyed your lovely words very much barry..hugss

~Victoria

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-04-26 07:59 PM

Barry - how well I know your words...

BC

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-04-26 07:59 PM

I have often thought what life must be like for those who do not make memories, and I cannot abide that someone could hold such emptiness...

thank goodness for memories...all kinds...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-04-26 08:03 PM

(big huggggsssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all lovers who are left on their knees like this and I pray that the dove will always come warbling back and comforting them with loves memories as a new sparrows song of love will sound off! (sigh) This is powerfully compassionate, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2002-04-26 08:18 PM

Magnus darling boy How do you do this? Keep writing such perfect poetic wonders that fill my soul with such sweetness, I can feel the ache all along my nerves right into my deepest part of my soul.

You know I’m going to say that I love this utterly, outstanding writing as always YOU are a fabulous writer and this is utter delight. Sadness throbs in your lines and I’m awed by them time after time

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2002-04-26 08:20 PM

Barry~

haunting....just a memory right?? Peace kind friend.....

Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

7 posted 2002-04-26 09:21 PM

Hello Barry

Once again your words stir up so many of my emotions. I could feel the love and longing vividly throughout your beautiful words.

Take care....Sue

Suetang

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