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Evidence |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Evidence from modern heiroglyhic reliefs of walls whispers echo from under awnings tacked on stalls, from the brushed sands swept clean from sedementary beds predacious discoverers confront fossils, old routes are bled. Young bats in their crannies notice subtle change swoop from their roosts by the rules of the game; fished from water surfaces if they fall prematurely new evidence shines light on our undiscovered fury. of hunters that tallied their catch of beast and died of the rocket that sent up secret codes to be spied; flakes of evidence take passengers to the ground ticker tape parades spiral with to confound. Heiroglyphic sketches on graded mesa roof tops tell me the future repeats the past with a flop; undiscovered fury points to baked-in clay details whispers echo from shelterd premises gone retail. Tainted civilzations came, families conquered the earth was squeezed and powers squandered artifacts were seized, bas-reliefs were laundered seen through Horus eyes of the heiroglyph that wonders. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-26-2002 04:54 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very interesting, I lke this. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Wow, this is soooooo very powerfully thought-provoking, sweet friend, it too amazes me how lines and circles can always hold so much hidden meaning and remain so evident to how time and civilization react! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Noah, Caralinamoon, much is taken for granted about all those lines and shapes!thanks for sharing |
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