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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-04-09 09:16 AM

“SOMETHING WANTED”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Looking here, looking over there,
looking just about everywhere…
Something strange has overcome,
this music, it’s adventuresome…

Want to dance with a woman,
hold her tight with abandon…
Fingers touching on her hips,
kisses warm, moist on lips…

Over the dance floor with her,
tightly embracing, an abductor…
Loving just one, in red dress,
touch of her neck, bareness…

Something wanted, still not sure,
certainly feel she’s the cure…
Swaying together, moving, grooving,
her eyes piercing into mine, alluring…
~~~~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-04-09 09:19 AM

May I have this dance?
Lovely words here Bill...
Enjoyed the sway of this
early morning melody.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2002-04-09 09:24 AM

Bill darling boy this is utterly utterly wonderful, this is utterly utterly perfect the rhythm in this is utterly divine, I can feel the music in this delightful musical poem. Truly gorgeous writing, I love it

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-04-09 09:59 AM

Hmmmm save one for me Bill. Great poem. I enjoyed it and felt I was there on the dancefloor dancing. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-04-09 10:11 AM

(smiles) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, I just know your love will always love to dance with you forever and ever like this! (big hugggsssss) Your words of love always bring asmile to my face, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2002-04-09 12:05 PM

Nice two step, Bill. Enjoyed lots.
Sandra

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2002-04-09 03:36 PM

play it again BC. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2002-04-09 05:10 PM

Love this alot bill..i could feel you groovin across the dance floor..

nicely penned as always

~Victoria

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

8 posted 2002-04-09 10:12 PM

Bill, it's something every woman dreams of...to dance with a man who only has eyes for you. Seductive, alluring poem.

***Ivy Rose

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

9 posted 2002-04-09 10:23 PM

BC
I think IvyRose has said it all and what every woman dreams of.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

10 posted 2002-04-10 12:49 PM

Red dress...you're a brave man, BC!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2002-04-11 08:24 PM

Alluring it is, yet elusive at times.
You write of the wanting to be loved and cared for with such honesty BC~
I liked this a lot!!

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