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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-04-26 02:49 PM

She comes on strong in waves.
Delicate tipping candle dance.
Flickering spectrum tongue.
Watch the light fall to her form.
Calling the room's shapes.
Waxen melten silhouette.
Comes on strong in waves.
A blinding green, her coning head.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2002-04-26 03:05 PM

Soleil shall enjoy the
fact that perhaps she
inspired this from you...

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-04-26 03:13 PM

Oh, definitely. I give Soleil full credit for getting the idea of a green flame stuck in my head. And then I just sorta ... went off.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2002-04-28 11:19 AM

WOW--bsquirrel~

this is fantastic....from start to finish, and the title really drew me in...

Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-04-28 11:34 AM

Went off lighting fires it seems! This is very good!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-04-28 11:36 AM

bsquirrel
Good write, enjoyed.

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2002-04-28 11:54 AM

Enjoyed...nicely done..

~Victoria

KimW
Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 268
Medford, Oregon, USA

7 posted 2002-04-28 12:57 PM

"Watch the light fall to her form.
Calling the room's shapes.
Waxen melten silhouette.
Comes on strong in waves."

nicely done images.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-04-28 03:34 PM

Thanks everyone.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-04-28 04:47 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is so very lovely and passionate, sweet friend, I too was caught attention by the title and saw the splendid imagery reading this! (big hugggssssss) Your words always spell such enchantment, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

10 posted 2002-04-29 03:33 PM

Danke.

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