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Élan
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Élan She was born without a middle name because of this, there were times she felt as if she had no center he had come about to know her and to feel her hiding she would take a veil or two now and then sometimes silk sometimes satin he would peer into and beyond to find her blush and still she could not find her own center without his eyes he pondered this the one day she could not drop that last veil and began calling her Élan for in all of a word’s meaning it captured her as she gave of herself and finally draped his mind with the last veil ~*~ In Solemn Dedication |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Nicely done. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
She was born without a middle name because of this, there were times she felt as if she had no center ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *Sitting here nodding head as the tears spill...* How very well you have penned this feeling Lady. And oh, how well I can indeed relate. This is exquisite and headed straight for my library! ~Hugs~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Powerful. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Soft, mysterious and moving... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms whyte she is lovely this elan would enjoy holding her veil as she stepped from it's confine enjoyed the write |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nicely done, my friend...enjoyed. jwesley |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"for in all of a word’s meaning it captured her as she gave of herself and finally draped his mind with the last veil"   (smiles) Wow, this is sooooooo mysteriously beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always touch my heart so deeply! (kiss on cheek) This is veiled with such depth and imagery, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady Loved this! Sometimes a word is all that's needed. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
she could not find her own center without his eyes he pondered this the one day she could not drop that last veil and began calling her Élan for in all of a word's meaning it captured her as she gave of herself and finally draped his mind with the last veil =============================== Lady...you have lifted the veil on exquisite with this write... this is just so very lovely...delicate like lace...and soft as satin.The muse is enchanting us...and we thank thee  ... and I don't know why ... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such satin flow to these words. ThisDiamond |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You flow in this as fresh water, across long overdue rocks, somewhere deep in a quiet forest. So lovely.. Sincerely, Regina |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now this one absolutely floated like a piece of the finest silk dropped from atop the center of something, somewhere Imagination is more important that knowledge |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Just in time The 7th one? |
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