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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2002-04-26 01:20 PM

Reflections I saw of what used to be
sink with the setting of the sun
as twilight reached with her soul fingers
to find peace in Lunas light.

Through the silence of night
I heard the longing of tomorrow
call softly for the rising of the dawn
while in silent reverie watching with awe
as yesterday slipped into the morn
of a new day as the winds
of the past blew into the calm
of evermore.

Luna gracefully bowed to the
approaching tomorrow and the darkness
slowly faded as it slipped into the memories
of eternity...
~and then came the dawn...

dmsmith 04-26-02

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (04-26-2002 02:58 PM).]

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2002-04-26 01:35 PM

quote:
as twilight reached with her soul fingers
to find peace in Lunas light.

Beautiful...

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2002-04-26 01:48 PM

quote:
Luna gracefully bowed to the
approaching tomorrow and the darkness
slowly faded as it slipped into the memories
of eternity...
~and then came the dawn...

how precious these thoughts....you keep flying too.....

Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

3 posted 2002-04-26 03:31 PM

this piece takes my breath away....
beautiful
~~ Connie ~~

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

4 posted 2002-04-26 06:50 PM

'Reflections I saw of what used to be
sink with the setting of the sun
as twilight reached with her soul fingers
to find peace in Lunas light.'

Beautiful imagery, GS...I love it! Great write...

sp

I've been down this road forever,
and the time has come to circle back home...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-04-26 06:55 PM

beautifully written Donna, *s

M

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-04-26 06:56 PM

"Luna gracefully bowed to the
approaching tomorrow and the darkness
slowly faded as it slipped into the memories
of eternity...
~and then came the dawn..."

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo gorgeous and enchanting, sweet friend, and may the dawn forever mirror everyones eyes with the promise of eternity ever eminent with joy! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2002-04-26 07:30 PM

A quick pop in to say thanks to all. I am trying to spend a lot more time reading and replying to others hence not getting enough time to reply to each of you individually. My joy is in your words left here, and the ones I get to read among these blue pages. Thanks all, hugs and peace to poetry land.
~D~

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)

texasrose
Member

since 2001-10-24

Posts 146

8 posted 2002-04-26 08:30 PM

Deep and insightful ~D. I see much growth in your words. *s* It's a pleasure to read you again.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

9 posted 2002-04-26 09:24 PM

wonderful approach to the last line GS...making it explode before us....

jwesley

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-04-26 09:40 PM

I could see in your words this shift from
night to dawn...in all of it's own splendor.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2002-05-01 05:10 AM

I have these nights too.

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