Open Poetry #20 |
Helix |
Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Helix Tendril thoughts crept up slim ankles calves currying curl to tease his view as he watched breathe on the intake green fires emerge from their delicate shadows all to catch a glimpse of what was to be. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
sumptous thoughts and suggestivity put to verse, I'm gasping... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
calves currying curl ========================== Girl....you keep this up and summers gonna come in sooner *S* Inhale.....exhale ... *sigh* ... and I don't know why ... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
SN Soft and sensual...lovely read! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so sensual.... Seems everyone is intune at Passions lately ~Hugs for this keeper~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
can visualize this pose and then the stutter step the lean and the release nothing more exciting than a lady with proper form at the bowling lanes.. could have sensual overtones to huh? (big grin...) very fine ms N |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Very lovely... Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
mmm...very lovely write...soft and sensual.. Like a red brick, |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
As cool as a green flame. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Must be something to do with the moon being close to or full now..... softly, softly sensual and such a delicacy to partake of..... Mag |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now, I liked the "twists and turns" of this one. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Wow, I love the sensual feel behind these passionate words, these words ignite with such depth and magic! (big hugggssssss) This is absolutely wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-26-2002 08:25 PM).] |
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