Open Poetry #20 |
Latin Music |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Through the underbrush, sprays are dumped catch cultivators off, reduce crops to humps; processed powders are still sent outdoors latin music plays, feet tap on floors Sheets of the music taped around wiasts young kids, enlisted to transport fate; like gypsy kids tossed into crescendo streets, latin music attracts, tourists and locals meet. sprays fall, millions protect pipeline ventures locals stage fights for control and adventures; sunglassed tourists migrate to sheltered coasts surveillance is kept by an air ship that floats. Millions invested in one crop or another latin rythem beats to console forlorn mothers tangoed feet weave through insurgent grounds latin music plays until new crops are found. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-26-2002 10:05 AM).] |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Images of Mosquito Bay come to mind...thank you for this, Ecrivan... |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Thankyou Soleil, actual troubles in Latin America prompted this |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ecrivan You spray just enough mist not to hid what you say. Enjoyed |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
I do enjoy people who can take the moment and capture it just so... a second read... |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hi Sy, I chose an indirect approach not to be to blatant glad you enjoyed |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Soleil, And so I my work has found appeal in the hearts of many here, Diamond, Amusemi to mention a couple, and also some moderators Take care. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very interesting Martin. I love the way you almost always..never come right out and tell us what you are saying...therefore encouraging a second, and at times a third read...excellent! Well done my friend! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thanking you, directness here would I think touch on some violent words..ddiscretion tells me to leave those out |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Oh Martin, I immediately smiled just reading the title, Latin music is my favorite music of all for I love the cadence and melody it has and how through time it has also held a deep meaning of spiritual awakening and politics! (sigh) Shakira is my favorite artist of all, and I also admire the works of Little Joe, Rocky, Y La Familia and other Latin artists. (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Martin~ You are a very interesting writer, I did indeed have to read this a second time...thats great work sir!! hugsss Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Noah and Lauren, I am blessed to have your appreciation. Thanks for sharing your thoughts |
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