Open Poetry #20 |
Somedays |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
There is a sadness inside of me, knowing that someday never comes. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl you write so well, this is exceptionally well written. I love it I absolutely love it Absolutely excellent writing you know I love every golden word. You are an incredible writer. Fabulous writing utterly utterly fabulous Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Maureen, Me too..but we must never say never and be convinced that lack is forever |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I know sweetie hugss... ~Victoria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, The wonders of sad. Very good. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hmmmm....I have to agree with you...it never comes, you have to go get it! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thanks everyone..I just felt like writing something simple the other day and I always use the word someday...but as you know someday is always a day away..*s M |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I know this all too well. An excellent senryu Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
if you must be sad then tomorrow never comes someday WILL be here |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Perfect lines. |
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