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Cinder's Toe Ring
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Cinder's Toe Ring |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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Cinder's Toe Ring (the true story) Clicking your heels won't take you home Monkeys don't fly in the dead of the night And if there really was a yellow brick road it would lead me straight to the house of straw, where the hunter met his end to the wolf, who now wipes his jowls with the little girls hood staining it the color of his feast Mice, are just rodents chewing away on another poem I've tossed to the floor, while I clean up the mess my heart made when it bled all over the pillow that damned fool carried the shoe on ...you know that shoe made of glass The one that shatters your dreams while it slices your toes and the silver ring ....falls to the floor snow ©4/10/02 "Trace my body with your words |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Snow~ What bittersweet imagery to this little piece~ I loved the sardonic twist~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
A fairy tale gone wonderfully, wonderfully wrong. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
a new look at some old fairytales..I liked the twisted fate too  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Cinderella...hmmmmmm.....a slightly different twist to it...but a very good one... |
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