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Hollowman Member
since 2001-06-01
Posts 117 |
A selfless man of smiles I be yep, travelled this planet from land to sea cast some happiness here and there and in between never asked for anything, not one bean! Always happy and never sad yep, been there too and got the hat I realised that life's only what you make it some do well, some fake it but not for me the pseudo life its for the sunny days and laughter I truly strive Curumba, if there was a plane to the moon I'd be gone, to the side where the sun never shone to explore and dig and build a home with a seat in the yard I could call my own But hey, its okay to dream and fine to wish, and oneday maybe i'll just find my fish until then, I'll chop trees and leave my mark then vanish into the night like a spark Rich |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
hey there  I found your poem on page 3, and really enjoyed it so back up top it goes! I really loved the last two lines. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
'vanish into the night like a spark'-I like that. This is a poem about a life I always wanted to live. Nan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Curumba...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HollowMan~ 'if there was a plane to the moon I'd be gone, to the side where the sun never shone to explore and dig and build a home with a seat in the yard I could call my own' If you're gonna dream ... dream BIG~ Enjoyed the word-fantasy~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Still like this...James |
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