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On the Sea of Love
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On the Sea of Love |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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On the Sea of Love By Larry Chadwick I was drifting in the thought of you, With no particular place to be. Relaxed by the reflection I saw, Contented just to have you inside of me. It’s always perfect weather, For floating with you in mind. All I have to do is close my eyes, That’s how easy you are to find. So here I am in the sailboat of love, Mooring my feelings to your heart. Satisfied while laying here on deck, That in my drifting it won’t be apart. April 24, 2002 It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! [This message has been edited by Larry C (04-25-2002 10:39 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Remember that song..."Come with me...to the sea...of love...James |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I too always love to dream every night just so I can hold Joanna close to my heart in my dreams and hope I really can have her in the future! (sigh) May you always hold onto your sweetest dreams and they will come true always, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You know, that sounds like how I get through my life without him, just hang with him in my head, and it's ok. Sad, but ok. Good poem, Larry. Sandra |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
James, That was before my time...  Thanks.Noah, Actually, I wasn't thinking of dreams at night, but rather of mid-day. Thanks always. Sandra, We all have little confessions of how we cope. The good thing is if it works. Peace. Thank you. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Larry darling boy this is awesome, truly exceptional writing. So amazing what you convey such grace and style, a painter of pictures, an artist sublime, this is excellent writing as always. You have such an outstanding gift to write. You know of course I love this, I love the lines in this the softness, the safety of a heart floating on the sea of love. Utterly utterly excellent writing  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very nice Larry..I like this alot..love thoughts anchored in the mind.. ~Victoria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Larry C, Well done and if you don't believe me read Marsha again. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
So very peaceful and soothing! I loved it! Great write. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Larry~ I was thinking the same about the tune JamesMichael mentioned.....great under tone of writing....very peaceful in deed..... Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into an ocean of you, what if I told you, what if I said that I love you do we dare cross that line between your heart and mine~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-25-2002 11:07 AM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
now, you know I love this one |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I was drifting in the thought of you, With no particular place to be. Relaxed by the reflection I saw, Contented just to have you inside of me. It’s always perfect weather, For floating with you in mind. All I have to do is close my eyes, That’s how easy you are to find. your writing has come so far my friend...you are reaching....this is wonderful. *s* Like a red brick, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice sailing Larry....I can hear the waves lapping along the hull... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Mushy, Awww you make writing so worth the effort. Thank you so much for your kindness. Victoria, Yup they are...Thanks. Sy, Thanks. LOL Very clever and I did. amusemi, Exactly as I hoped...thanks. Lauren,  If only I knew the tune! *smile* Thank you.It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, Finally, one for you! Thanks.Donna, Have you been talking to Lauren? LOL Thank you so very much! Magnus, Cool...it worked! Thank you friend. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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