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The Middle Of The End
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The Middle Of The End |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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 The Middle Of The End Oh, I sure know what gone feels like But, the rain's every bit here in my head I'm right where sane and losing strength Have found their way to friends... I think I've been about everywhere one can be I've touched the sun and Lords knows I wear the ground You must not cry that my thunder is louder then yours Cause, I fear, not you, holding me down... I know the difference between the ol' mighty and the wicked Sometimes, feel the winds much harder then most souls do My friend, I'm down and it's pouring like never before But, you must never allow my rain to immerse you, too... I'm beyond the beginning and just hanging somewhere in the middle Not even sure if tomorrow will be mine to hold But, I can say on my journey to find my way home You never once allowed me to feel the bitter cold... I'm stuck in the middle, the middle of the end Where moving on and needing you come crashing in I am in between dreaming and reality Where hanging on and falling apart have no certainty... Oh, if asked if I've found my place, one thing I'd say The world will surely know when I have reached the end I'm stuck in the middle of the end between losing myself and grace Yes, I've walked the rain, I did, but in the hands of a friend... Sauni @~~~>~~ The Sun Shines Not On Us, But In Us The River Flows Not Past, But Through Us [This message has been edited by Saunni (04-25-2002 12:05 AM).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It's a good tribute to friendship, Saunni....and not wanting to bring your friend down with your own burdens makes you a very special lady  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh Saunni, I understand how you feel, and believe me, we're all in this journey together, and yet we will find a time where we crawl out from between the chasm of the middle of the end and we find that beacon in the end, but it is really just the beginning of a whole new dream come true for you! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
This is very touching, Sauni. I will always be your friend. ((Sauni)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this sounds so much like a song and I love it! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh, if asked if I've found my place, one thing I'd say The world will surely know when I have reached the end I'm stuck in the middle of the end between losing myself and grace Yes, I've walked the rain, I did, but in the hands of a friend... mmmm yes Saunni, this is beautiful...thank you for sharing... Like a red brick, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes, this does sound like a song. . . one that I'm sure a lot of us have sung. . . wonderful my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 one more time around for others to read |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes, I've walked the rain, I did, but in the hands of a friend... so many beautiful lines M |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Saunni, That's a walk I'd enjoy! Let it pour. Wonderful write. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful! |
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