Open Poetry #20 |
An Island Edged In Gold |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
From high above the golden sand dunes We look down in awe below The still waters are bathed in amber The island edged in a golden glow We hear a seagull's lonely cry As he flys off into the night You stand with your arms around me As we absorb this magnificent sight The sun has since retired Laid to rest after a long hot day The moon will take over proceedings Spreading moonlight across the bay A place for friends and lovers Some stay from night 'til morn Bearing witness to nature's beauty As the sun rises with a brand new dawn Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may that golden glow forever shine over the ocean and radiate with the afterglow of your dreams always! (kiss on cheek) This is tropically majestic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue, a beautiful poem and a very awesome view....Enjoyed this... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Enjoyed the colors. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
This is very romantic, Sue. Love burns bright, doesn't it? |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Beautiful words and the picture is just magical. How I long to visit your homeland. Please continue to write and show. Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Even without the picture this would have been a vision seen through your words. Extremely beautiful Sue. *s* Like a red brick, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
One of my favorites to date. This is truly beautiful...I could see the sun. ThisDiamond |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your lovely comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed this beautiful sunset with me. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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