Open Poetry #20 |
If........ |
Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
If... If I could read The words that Pound in your chest Would my name Be there As it once Was Connie McDonald April18, 2002 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I like this one Connie *s M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is soooooo powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, may sweet memories of friendship forever beat from this special persons heart and may you always be remembered by this friend! (sigh) I think we can all ask ourselves these questions sometimes, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Connie...this is a very powerfully presented question...I doubt that I shall forget these words soon... Very well said.. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Maureen, Noah and Magnus..... Thanks for your comments... I kept trying to make this a longer poem.. but it took away from these words.. so I left it alone LOL ~~ Connie ~~ |
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