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Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2002-04-24 10:53 AM

Nothing

No cleansing tears
no laughter bliss,
no soothing touch,
no kindred kiss.
In peace, release
I cannot find,
no edge of ease
to still my mind.

Darkness quenches
it's thirst in taunt,
no angel arms
to hold in haunt.
Regretful past,
unraveled fray,
weep of woe,
my dreams decay.

Undesired moth
and nothing more,
my bones, they break
upon the shore.
I am flea
of destiny
a worthless void
in misery.

Another groan,
blackened day,
all worth I hold
fades away.
Sky of scream,
wingless bird,
no Godly ear,
prayers unheard.
No pistol raping flesh of head,
There is no point, my soul is dead.

By Melissa P. Monette

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-04-24 11:03 AM

Melissa,
You sure write intensely! Wow...it makes me squirm but it is so powerfully good.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-04-24 11:09 AM

Melissa...this a a wonderful write!
Most powerful...well done!
~Hugs~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-04-24 12:16 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Melissa, this is sooooooo heartbreaking, I hope everything is alright, for from one heart to another I know this kind of pain and I am always here for you if you need someone to talk to! (wipes tears) You are never nothing, you mean so much to us all and I know you will find everything your heart desires, we all love you so much, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

4 posted 2002-04-24 01:27 PM

Where nothing is, something soon reveals itself.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-04-24 01:37 PM

Melissa,
You are a fine poet. And all the world should know it. No matter what you get off your chest, you know that I think your the best.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (04-24-2002 06:20 PM).]

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-04-24 01:40 PM

You make darkness glow with this poem.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2002-04-24 04:33 PM

I know that you stare into that dark candle with both eyes closed. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

8 posted 2002-04-24 05:08 PM

Oh my gosh this poem is absolutely stunning...it is so incredibly powerful...Magnificent writing that screams to the soul of your reader...my heart wanted to embrace you....**big hugs**
Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2002-04-24 05:31 PM

enjoy your read

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