Open Poetry #20 |
Must Be Dreaming |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“MUST BE DREAMING” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Always on my mind, it certainly accrues… Thinking of you, writing the blues… Songs from my pen, comes from inside… Rhythm is there, my heart its guide… Pondering at times, words to you I write… How you captured me, during my plight… Must be dreaming, knowing one to believe… Trusting it’s real, you won’t deceive… ~~~~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
like the way this flows gently with emotions nicely done |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Bill, this is so dreamy and beautiful, I hope now you not only dream but your dream has come true and now you strum guitar with the one you love at hearts content! (big hugggsssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sahring! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
always nice when we have someone to inspire us..nicely done Bill... ~Victoria |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was simply beautiful Bill and so very much enjoyed. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
What is the old adage??? Once bitten, twice scorned or something like that.... I sense the desire, yet also the uncertainty. Lots of feelings within this write BC... Your usual delicate touch... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Magnus hit it right on the head BC. . . but, sometimes. . . you just have to say. . ."what the heck??" besides. . . well. . . you know the rest. . . great work. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
enjoyed.... your words always seem so real... ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful, as always Bill! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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