Open Poetry #20 |
are you ready for me? |
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
been raving for so many years and shall be mad for many more to come crazy is what i am, my dear friend of misery crazy is what shall become of me sometimes, the sun goes down and the canvas turns crimson sometimes, there is a fire in the skies above burning so bright, fuming furiously and in those sometimes, i think it is okay to be crazy i think it is okay to be me oh! to be me is an idea so outcast, and i am overturned, like a box of nonsensical whims and i’m spinning like a top caught in an endless tailspin i think it is okay to be crazy i think it is okay to be me and between the great fire and the much-photographed solitude of a crimson-tipped evening, i am caught in a state of self-denial forcing a silly smile, thinking it is after all great to be me and when all the nuts and their bolts are in place all i shall ask you is are you ready, ready for me? |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
We're ready, Sudhir....very well done! God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you Elizabeth... Regards, Sudhir |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sometimes, the sun goes down and the canvas turns crimson sometimes, there is a fire in the skies above burning so bright, fuming furiously and in those sometimes, i think it is okay to be crazy i think it is okay to be me ============================== Crazy like a fox .. and Yeah..were ready...give us all your crazy Clever use of imagery here Sud...and inner reflection. Ponder on poet sir...we love your crazy LOL Now for me some words come easy |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Oh Sudhir, I believe everyone is crazy in some way, and it is absolutely fine to be because that is what makes us unique! (big hugggssssss) I am ready, sweet friend, you have all our invited atention, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Love the crimson-fiery imagery. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks to all my dearest friends from pipworld... regards, sudhir |
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