Open Poetry #20 |
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are you ready for me? |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium ![]() |
been raving for so many years and shall be mad for many more to come crazy is what i am, my dear friend of misery crazy is what shall become of me sometimes, the sun goes down and the canvas turns crimson sometimes, there is a fire in the skies above burning so bright, fuming furiously and in those sometimes, i think it is okay to be crazy i think it is okay to be me oh! to be me is an idea so outcast, and i am overturned, like a box of nonsensical whims and i’m spinning like a top caught in an endless tailspin i think it is okay to be crazy i think it is okay to be me and between the great fire and the much-photographed solitude of a crimson-tipped evening, i am caught in a state of self-denial forcing a silly smile, thinking it is after all great to be me and when all the nuts and their bolts are in place all i shall ask you is are you ready, ready for me? |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
We're ready, Sudhir....very well done! ![]() God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you Elizabeth... Regards, Sudhir |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sometimes, the sun goes down and the canvas turns crimson sometimes, there is a fire in the skies above burning so bright, fuming furiously and in those sometimes, i think it is okay to be crazy i think it is okay to be me ============================== Crazy like a fox .. and Yeah..were ready...give us all your crazy ![]() Clever use of imagery here Sud...and inner reflection. Ponder on poet sir...we love your crazy LOL Now for me some words come easy |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (giggles in delight) Oh Sudhir, I believe everyone is crazy in some way, and it is absolutely fine to be because that is what makes us unique! (big hugggssssss) I am ready, sweet friend, you have all our invited atention, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Love the crimson-fiery imagery. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks to all my dearest friends from pipworld... regards, sudhir |
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