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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-04-23 11:35 PM



(For you, my lovely RosePetal! )

White Rain (Pantoum)
By: Noah Eaton
4/23/02

Joined with her in true love
Balming me in ecstacy
With white rain, warm tears of the doves
Tears of angels shine happily

Balming me in ecstacy
Her fairy tale is timeless
Tears of angels shine happily
Flooding my body with kisses

Her fairy tale is timeless
Happily ever after
Flooding my body with kisses
Holding my angel forever

Happily ever after
With white rain, warm tears of the doves
Holding my angel forever
Joined with her in true love

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-23-2002 11:36 PM).]
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ParisGrl
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1 posted 2002-04-23 11:43 PM

Noah,

{{{{hugs}}}} I enjoyed this very much....

Laura
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2 posted 2002-04-24 12:00 PM

NOAH~


Sigh~

wow I love this, so very exciting to see you write of a love, that we all love as well.... good on you....


Lauren~


~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-24-2002 12:01 AM).]
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-04-24 05:30 AM

Excellent writing Noah...James
Suetang
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4 posted 2002-04-24 06:21 AM

Hello Noah

I always see so much love and beauty within your words and this was no exception.

Take care my friend......Sue

Suetang
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5 posted 2002-04-24 11:28 AM

Noah - you write with such warm, truly a romantic... Lovely, lovely poem...

BC
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6 posted 2002-04-24 12:06 PM

Hope love will always fill your heart dear one..hugss ..enjoyed as always

           ~Victoria
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7 posted 2002-04-24 12:20 PM

nice enjoyed
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