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When Night Comes...
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When Night Comes... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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When I Night Comes When night comes, the tears fall down my cheek I just surrender all, and give into feeling weak Looking up at the stars and moon hanging high above I say these simple words to our sweet Lord above Please God, allow tommorrow to come a little sooner than you might So that I can escape the darkness around me and awaken in the light Let these tears that I cry turn into a radiant smile Ease the pain in my heart, make it fade for a while When night comes, I miss you more than I can say The tears fall down endlessly, even more than in the day I wrap my arms around myself, trying to fight the chill of the cold Always in your hand, my heart you do hold God, have mercy on me please, hear my silent plea Bring my lover back, set my heart free I pray with all my heart that my heart feels your sweet love again I miss you dearest love of mine, my most cherished friend "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do" [This message has been edited by Aimster (04-23-2002 11:33 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh Amy....*big big hugs* "Please God, allow tommorrow to come a little sooner than you might So that I can escape the darkness around me and awaken in the light Let these tears that I cry turn into a radiant smile Ease the pain in my heart, make it fade for a while" this part...touches my heart  |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Amy, This is a beautiful poem......i enjoyed it. Take Care, Laura |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Amy, You covered the night and I covered the morning. Excellent write. I hope your prayer is answered! It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Amy, this is such a powerful yearning, I hope your true love does come back soon and bring ease to your heart that you deserve so much! (kiss on cheek) This is sad but powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
When night comes, the tears fall down my cheek I just surrender all, and give into feeling weak Let these tears that I cry turn into a radiant smile Ease the pain in my heart, make it fade for a while AimsterSweetie, the above just tugged and tugged at my heartstrings... Such beautiful expression PoetFriend... Thank you so much4this precious read you've provided me2nite... HugsNsmiles2Ualways *~coco~* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Always in your hand, my heart you do hold ================================ that says it all ... beautifully and sincerely... I know how hard it is to love long distance.. I hope you wont have to do it much longer... this is a touching prayer poem.... heart-hugs Amy-girl jm Now for me some words come easy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis of my heart girl is simply gorgeous, absolutely perfect. The flow of this river of words is an aching soul. Beautifully written, well done. How difficult it is to love long distance darling heart, and how proud I am of you for sticking with it although the going gets touch. You know I love this don’t you? Of course you do since you know me sooooooooo well, I could lie you know beloved, I could say, oh you know it’s okay………. But you know this is much much better than just superb don’t you darling? Well you should do it is utterly utterly divine, and I love it as I love you, big sisterly hugs darling heart.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice expression of your feelings...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now this poem finds the depths of need and love. . . excellent work from you Amy, one of your best. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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