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Neck Lacing
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Neck Lacing |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
I lie around her neck shimmering gold a snake of dare gently looping eyesight to gentle curves and warm smells where nothing is Tabu for me... I draw your eye by glitter you stray eye's stay and thoughts nestle in she wears black to accent my positive neckline curves find me going places you cannot touch I am warmed by her skin and stroked by fingers don't you find yourself wishing a little harder and finding envy in a strand of gold all you can do is sigh |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Decca darling girl, what a delight it is to read your writing. I cannot understand why this has fallen so far down the list with no replies Oh well, I get to be the first to say how fabulous this is. I’m always, eternally stunned by the way you shape and form a poem. This is outstandingly good. Wonderful writing, excellent utterly utterly perfect. I absolutely love it    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Nice...I liked the point of view here. Quite different!!! (And yes, I remember Tabu!! Stank to high heaven on me, though, but smelled great on my sister!) I really enjoyed this one!  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is good.........What a man would give to grace the neck of a beautiful woman all of the hours of the day.... Nicely done Deca....softly passionate but very effective... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (sigh) This is filled with such grace and love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Deca...for some reason this put a wicked grin on my face as I read.... something so tantalizing about the thought.  Love it! ~Hugs~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh Deca this just breathes of tantalization. This is great, and I agree with Nancy too!! Wonderful... Like a red brick, |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
creative, very....I like this |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
~* Sharon *~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
can imagine something like this lady skin modeling just a whisper of gold strand and eyes that say am I over dressed... lovely images ms deca |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Thank you all, for reading... it was just a thought that had been  hanging around... [This message has been edited by Decaflame (04-24-2002 11:59 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I draw your eye by glitter you stray eye's stay and thoughts nestle in ======================== *smiling at you decca dear* very very cool write. LOL@ Sens Tabu reply and smiling at DS's insightful "eye" reply Now for me some words come easy |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Yum. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It's not the strand of gold I envy (you're just not my type *G*) ... It's the write of it that has my poetic lil heart turning shades of jealous green. *G* This is a sensual beauty, Deca! *S* |
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