Open Poetry #20 |
Hidden Heart Places...(or I Am Here..) |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You reach into your heart taking me to those places you had buried so deep inside that you had forgotten they ever existed... Together we walk hand in hand along the edges of your dreams... Your eyes show the soul of a spirit that could not remember how to fly, and all I could do was take your hand and through tears of love whisper amidst the sounds of silence.... I am here~ I could feel the flicker of your flame reaching, reaching for the sky that it might again burn with the passion for life that it once held... as tears fell.... falling from eyes of blue as you took me to your hidden heart places, and I... I with all my love for you could only whisper... I am here~ (more rambling thoughts....) Theres a man in his own prison, with a crime that nobody knows he has sentenced himself to die with no chance of pardon or parole.. he's lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (04-23-2002 03:32 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you are here. . . now, be where you are. . . wonderful GS. . . just wonderful. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is a wonderful poem!!! I love it. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwww, this is such a lovely ramble, sweet friend, may your love always be there with you and together may you find special places in each others hearts forever! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bravo!! a most beautiful write, Donna~ a soft whisper, of tender thoughts.... Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Donna, It's always nice to know...very nicely done. |
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