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Brain coral (inspired by a poem by Midnitesun)
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Brain coral (inspired by a poem by Midnitesun) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Have you held me in your hands? Underwater snowy sun. Feelings have been drained to numb, cauliflower whitened waves. Calcite foam I call it down to fossilize these moment's curves. A sculptor's map, a living rock below the sky, my crashing shell. And to those itching footprints there, and to the water-softened sand. And to the smooth shell's dying point and our sun's salt-eggy stare. I call it down. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
cauliflower whitened waves. Calcite foam I call it down to fossilize these moment's curves. A sculptor's map, a living rock below the sky, my crashing shell. And to those itching footprints there, and to the water-softened sand. And to the smooth shell's dying point and our sun's salt-eggy stare. ================================= may I repeat my reply on the last one... cuz you did it again... love the minds eye view you give us into your poetic head. very cool write Mike.... would love to read some of your prose if youre in the mood to share  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Feelings have been drained to numb, I know this feeling...your words have a calming read to them and many meanings depending.... thank you M |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Glad you enjoyed. |
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