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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

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By the Seaside

0 posted 2002-04-08 10:07 PM

Late in the afternoon
bathed in the warmth of the sun
lowering myself into the sinking
immersed in your body scent
it is there underwater
shifting sands on the ocean floor
where music plays and echoes
and waves roll in a rush
swaying to the rhythm
that moves beneath the sea~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-04-08 10:15 PM

I like this...it felt good...

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2002-04-08 10:16 PM

sounds like a romantic serenade on the ocean
bottom..maybe its at sunset with tide rolling out..imaginative, well done

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-04-08 10:16 PM

I agree with Sunshine...tis a good feelin'
that this poem does give!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-04-08 10:21 PM

(smiles) This is such a soft serenade, sweet friend, such love and passion and rhythm fills these words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2002-04-09 12:30 PM

Thanks to you lady and all you fine gentlemen, I appreciate it.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2002-04-09 02:00 AM

BluesSerenade~
I felt the movement of this piece~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

7 posted 2002-04-09 02:03 AM

Lori,
Would that be high tide or low tide?

Or doesn't it matter? Good write.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2002-04-09 08:35 AM

something about this
makes me want to
go to the beach
somewhere private and warm

enjoyed this bluez

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2002-04-09 09:21 AM

BluesSerenade - Been in that place and felt the ryhthm, nice write...

BC

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

10 posted 2002-04-09 10:00 AM

This is awesome dear girl. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

11 posted 2002-04-09 10:17 AM

Blues

Sounds like a peace place...I think I need the beach now too.

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

12 posted 2002-04-09 12:03 PM

this was just GORGEOUS! i love the
images you created in this, perfect
poetry as far as I am concerned...lovely
writing...warms the heart.

take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

13 posted 2002-04-09 12:13 PM

Bluesy,
you know I love this, right?

cause I so do

imagine315
New Member

since 2002-04-10

Posts 6

14 posted 2002-04-11 06:25 PM

where music plays and echoes
and waves roll in a rush
swaying to the rhythm
that moves beneath the sea~

What a beautiful flow & lovely choice of words ~*~ Very much enjoyed...

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

15 posted 2002-04-11 06:28 PM

Beautifully written

My thoughts just seemed to drift away into the waves of your words..I look forward to reading more, it was a delight

Kristen

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

16 posted 2002-04-11 07:58 PM

Marge~ I'm glad you felt it, thanks.

Larry~ What tides? I'm so far under I don't notice the difference anymore.

DS~ I'm so glad you got my drift and made yourself cozy. Thank you Stranger~

BC~ The sea is never still, even when she is calm there is still a mysterious rhythm beneath it all. Nice to see you here BC~

Floria~ Thanks, I appreciate you deary!!

Martie~ It's warming up here, and the beach is most definitely part of my weekend plans.  Thanks Martie~

Amy, Amy~  If I have warmed your heart then I have succeeded... your are always so kind.  Suffice to say I am touched by your replies.
*hugs across the miles*~

SEA~ I hoped you might, seeing that we're on the same beach and all.  You're sweet!

Imagine~ Welcome to these blue pages, and thank you for your kind words!

Kristen~ Likewise, it's a delight to here fom you as well. It took me a long time to get comfortable here, but it has been worth every second.  Thanks again~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (04-11-2002 07:59 PM).]

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

17 posted 2002-04-15 08:36 PM

Lori, your words never cease to stun me. Beautiful.

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

18 posted 2002-04-15 08:47 PM

I love reading you..*s
wish I could write as well.
hugss
M

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

19 posted 2002-04-15 09:07 PM

Ah, this is fun to dream about! Sinking into the waves, rolling around......and here I sit watching more snowflakes fall.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

20 posted 2002-04-15 09:20 PM

Ooooh! Don't know how I missed this one....
wow....love the feel of this...
excellent write.
~Hugs~

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

21 posted 2002-04-17 08:08 PM

i never read this before

shame shame is my name

nice write

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (04-17-2002 08:08 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

22 posted 2002-04-17 09:51 PM

Hugs Dee~  and thank you always for being so kind~

Maureen~ Oh my,  now you have me all flustered!
Interesting how we read others work and share the feelings behind them.  Thanks~

Midnitsun~ The sinking and rolling of the waves could also be compared to the falling and melting of snowflakes.  That is something I don't experience in my winters.  I thank you for that thought.

Nancy~ Thank you for your touch, and the warm feelings you leave, it is so nice of you
and I am appreciative of them.

*smirk*

Thanks Walt~

craigrk
Member

since 2001-12-23

Posts 123

23 posted 2002-04-17 11:27 PM

very unique image. thanks for the read

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

24 posted 2002-04-17 11:40 PM

Craig~

I'm glad you enjoyed the images.
That is if being unique means that you liked them.
I'm not one to assume anything.
Thanks again~

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

25 posted 2002-04-17 11:49 PM

Excellent write. Enjoyed the feeling of this one.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

26 posted 2002-04-18 01:11 PM

Lori~

Dancing the sea are we?? LOVELY!! what an image....very peaceful....

HUGSSS

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

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