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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2002-04-23 08:21 AM

Epopee

I would write me an epopee
To sooth our blights reality
To touch the tender of each heart
To wash away the anxious part

I wish to hail humanity
To sail a kite of sanity
To make it wax in every part
To salve the wounds of pox and start

Whispers seep about my head
Burst about the living bed
Fragile as a butterfly
Mounted on a flowers lie.

I would that it to mix with air
And be inhaled by all that’s there
Intoxicate a passage goal
And set a sign upon each soul

To tide a light and wane in rhyme
To ride a grain of sand in time

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2002-04-23 08:27 AM

Sy,
THank you for this epopee
The ending may go down in history as two of my favorite lines
Only you
Liz

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-04-23 09:02 AM

To tide a light and wane in rhyme
To ride a grain of sand in time
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sy, this is beautiful!!
Wonderful closing couplet.
Nice to have you home safe and sound.
~Morning Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2002-04-23 09:21 AM

So good to see you and read you as well, Sy...we missed you but knew you were in very, very good hands...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2002-04-23 09:59 AM

well penned sir sy
enjoyed this art

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2002-04-23 10:07 AM

SY~

It is indeed nice to see the picture of the poet, very lovely words penned here, welcome back....

Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
a ocean of you,
what if told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

6 posted 2002-04-23 10:35 AM

Seymour darling boy this is just perfect, OH how I missed my morning dose of Seymour. To imbibe you like the rarest wine, to sip the nectar straight from the cup of your fashioning, to cleanse my soul under a shower of Seymour’s crystal stream, oh what joy it gives my heart.

You know I utterly utterly love this don’t you. Welcome home, darling boy, you surely were missed xxxx

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2002-04-23 10:51 AM

To touch the tender of each heart
To wash away the anxious part
======================================
Whispers seep about my head
Burst about the living bed
Fragile as a butterfly
Mounted on a flowers lie.

I would that it to mix with air
And be inhaled by all that's there
Intoxicate a passage goal
And set a sign upon each soul

To tide a light and wane in rhyme
To ride a grain of sand in time
=======================================

I, like Liz, can only shake my head and smile in admire of those closing couplets.
They are your daily, poetic-soul signature my sweet poetman.

quote:
To touch the tender of each heart
To wash away the anxious part

never doubt that you do Stinkylove ...never doubt it.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2002-04-23 10:54 AM

Sy

Ab epopee it is! Good to read you again!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2002-04-23 10:56 AM

Seymour~

'I would that it to mix with air
And be inhaled by all that’s there
Intoxicate a passage goal
And set a sign upon each soul'

Indeed - Indeed !
Such a beautiful little piece of you to touch the soul of me~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2002-04-23 12:25 PM

Elizabeth,
It was so good to see you once again.

Love ya Sy.

Enchantress,
Thank you dear it is good to be home.

Lady,
Yes it was and I surely missed you.

Dark Stranger,
Thank you kind sir.

Greeneyes,
Sweet Lauren, thank you dear.

Marsha,
And surely I missed you, for you are the honey on my morning read. Love ya

JM,
I loved the three days, but it seemed like three years away from your opium words.
WWRS Love ya

Martie,
Good to read your words again. Love Sy

Marge,
Never doubt you fill my pipe with worded delight. Love ya Sy

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (04-23-2002 03:52 PM).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

11 posted 2002-04-23 03:24 PM

*LOL* @Opium(raspberry flavor) *winkiewinkie*
poppies for my Epopee poet

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

12 posted 2002-04-23 03:31 PM

Sy, not only was that beautiful but I could actually hear you reading it (hope that doesn't wear off anytime soon)

and JM, you really crack me up! Hugs to you and Isabelle.

~* Sharon *~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2002-04-23 03:56 PM

Sharon,
I hope so too and Isabel and I thank you just for being you. A delight. Sy

JM,
And you my opium pipe
Are more than a delight.
Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky

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