Cursive Lines..............................................repost

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Open Poetry #20

Cursive Lines..............................................repost

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-04-08 09:55 PM

Cursive Lines

Cursive moves, loops and roundings
lines of m’s to infinity
would you watch the loops and swirls
trailing on through eternity

taught at young age the twirling feel
lost from time in computer’s real
but found again in dark of night
when electric leaves one in candle’s light

cursive lines, an easy move
leaves me thinking in pensive groove
so first draft of mind then finds
me penning swift in cursive lines

like riding bikes, my eye is pleased
by cursive line, the soft touch eased
by light and swirl as my mind twirls
and layers unfold by ease unfurled

Oh! I would like to show you my cursive lines
as I would enfold you into more easier times

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-04-08 09:58 PM

LOVE the flow of this poem....and such a
vision of cursive writing....Gosh, IF I
had to write cursive poetry....you guys
would all send me to the teacher and give
me 10 demerits!!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-04-08 10:04 PM

(smiles) YAY!!! I love writing in cursive most of all; I used to have the worst handwriting of all but now since I have practiced a lot, I now am proud of my cursive writing and just love to make loops like you feel too! (big hugggsssss) This dances with style and magic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love an light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-04-08 10:53 PM

Karilea, may I just say 'thank you' and I enjoyed this very much as my final read for the day?
This is special...and so are you!
~Hugs, Nite~

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2002-04-08 11:01 PM

I'm glad you reposted this because I didn't see it the first time! I have the worst handwriting in cursive so I barely use it unless it's necessary. I rather print so my handwriting is clearly legible

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (04-08-2002 11:01 PM).]

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2002-04-08 11:01 PM

Yep, just like riding a bike!!

Loved the flow and the way your words flew.

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

6 posted 2002-04-08 11:06 PM

Cursive moves, loops and roundings
lines of m’s to infinity
would you watch the loops and swirls
trailing on through eternity

Beautiful flow and rhyme, Karilea and I also love your original topic...
It reminds me of 8th grade, when we all used to practice different handwritings...
I was able to write differently with each hand....I think I still can!

~lots of loopy hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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