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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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yesterday we sat in the two tree garden and sipped tea, I listened to you sing along to your cd's and made kiss mouths when you looked at me you were a little girl in woman skin I watched you sing and smile you offered me your hand to dance barefoot there in the afternoon rain you told me secrets from a week ago and wrote love poems in your mind I laughed when you covered your head and hid from my eyes and said it makes you crazy when I look inside your thoughts like that and, yes you want to seems you always want to anymore and you love me for that and most of all for just listening to you talk about little things and you wish I had been there when the little things were bigger and sometimes made you feel alone and would I just hold you again in my big arm cave place and tell you again about being lovely ©Dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (04-22-2002 07:20 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
delicate, and wonderful...your work has such immediacy..  K |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
James, thank you sir, I appreciate you Severn, thank you for your touch, glad you come by when you do. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
the little things were bigger and sometimes made you feel alone and would I just hold you again in my big arm cave place and tell you again about being lovely ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ From the sensual to the lovingly tender... Your writings greet my mornings.. and make my days. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You have a way of taking little "nice" things and making them seem so much more...well done Sir... |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Dark~ I know this little girl....what a lovely image and write....good morning poet friend....   Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into a ocean of you, what if told you, what if I said that I love you do we dare cross that line between your heart and mine~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-22-2002 09:56 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Enchantress...thank you ...it is enjoyment to share all of the woman Sunshine, good morning and thank you for the stop by ... Lauren, thank you for the reflections babe, and the reply |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
What a lovely way to greet the morn. Your writings sre so profound in their simplicity. The last stanza is wonderful. I know that big arm cave place. It belongs to my husband and I always feel so secure there. Nice to know that others have that place as well. Patience is the ability to idle your motor, when you feel like stripping your gears. Author Unknown |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Tender writing, real and knowing. Very much enjoyed! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
PhaChi lady....thank you and it is nice to know indeed that it is a comfort place of mutual reflection. Ms Martie, Thank you ms...glad you stopped by and gave an eye hug this am. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Sigh~ makes heavy eyes pool up and wonder why the listen place isn't a place to go everyday with everyone. Sure does make a heart feel lighter. Sincerely, Regina |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Regina, yes should be everyday stuff, hope it is for the lady here. Thank you hon for the read and reply. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very lovely words DS..cozy and sweet..just hope you were wearing deodorant in that arm cave ha..*wink* ~Victoria |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Victoria, you are so romantic (spank) after hours in the shower with the lady I would be fresh as irish spring...or dial..lava? Thanks babe |
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