Open Poetry #20 |
Love Touches Softly |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Love Touches Softly Love touches softly the edge of delight Love comes in silence like stars of the night Love shines a rainbow on all that is true Love changes every perspective and view Love comes to dwell in your heart’s richest dream Love wakes in dawning’s first lavendar beam Sometimes love’s lost but it never departs For it etches its signature deep in your heart Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (04-21-2002 09:55 PM).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh my! this is one of the most beautiful love poems I've ever read. This one is a definite keeper Liz! You should eat lobster more often! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just wonderful Elizabeth. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Poetic Perfection... ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always touch all our hearts deeply! (kiss on cheek) May love forever inscribe its signature deep in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hey...somebody pass the lobster! Love the love poem! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like your thoughts on love...James |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
your work glows as usual Lizzy...hugs..it's nice to read you again..are you still writing a poem a day? K |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
liz, yes love is all this and more...this was a really beautiful write, but all of yours are... take care. amy "you can't stop |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful love poem. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Aww Liz, you must dream in meter. This is beautiful and it's so you It's a keeper~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Liz, Beautiful poem, it sounds like one that should be published. Thanks for sharing it here. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed. . . well done my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Elizabeth...Beautifully rhymed, beautifully expressed. ***Ivy Rose |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz From you pen, it is so lovely! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Very sweet. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all so much for your comments. I'm so glad you liked this poem. Your words are appreciated Liz |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
... and love flows from your pen |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Interloper, Yes love does flow easily in ink. Wish the real thing were that easy Thanks Liz |
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