Open Poetry #20 |
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A Dream I Found In You |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
Here I stand before you I'm like the cat who got the cream As I rub my eyes disbelievingly As tho' I am living in a dream But as you take my hand in yours I realise these feelings are for real You pull me in so closely As one of my kisses you now steal Such a love I'd never felt Such tenderness virtually unheard Many feelings of love and desire Within my soul were beginning to stir When you whisper my name I feel I am floating on air To feel you here beside me As you tell me how much you care I've finally found my soulmate I need not search anymore Your love flows throughout my veins And holds the key to my heart's door Suetang |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sue darling girl Ohhhhhhh how I love this piece of yours it has style it has grace it flows across the page with perfection. Its timing is excellent, as are the words Thank you darling heart this is exquisite, and I know you’re going to say YOU always say that but that’s because you always write so beautifully and so well. ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() ![]() To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Hope you have a ring for that key! Nice write. ![]() It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Superbly done Sue....That little four letter word (love) certainly does flow from this poem... |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, I always smile when I think of my dream girl and how her heart would hold the key to mine! (kiss on cheek) May true love always fill your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Your words are flowing tenderly...James |
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