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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-04-21 01:37 PM


(This is for you Joanna, I love you sooooooooo much!)



To Be Kissed By You
By: Noah Eaton
4/21/02

Throughout the day I daydream of you
Coming to run in my arms in the summer from a few thousand miles away
Happily lifting you up and hugging you in tears
Convinced that God sent her on Heavenly Airlines to love her everyday

I dream I'm reciting serenades to you I never thought possible
Lying right next to you, crying with love not believing you are really here
And I'm seeing your smile, feeling the beating of your heart
Softly caressing the lute in your hair, playing songs of love so clear

I wish I knew how to paint just like Bottichelli
So I can paint you and show you how much you mean to me
How I dream of holding you this summer and being married to your smile
Having our own sweet dance to make up for the Prom I never got to see

You are the Tigger that cheers me up when I am feeling sad
Bouncing up and down with laughter in my Hundred Acre Wood
I hope deep down that in your heart you see me as something special
For truly you mean all the heavens combined to me, never being misunderstood

You have melted a place deep in my heart no one ever has
Now I know what it feels like to be in love, and I cry every time I dream of it
I want to be your Singing Sparrow of your hearts nest forever
Please God, I want to have her, she is all my heart desires

Every morning I wake up and look at your picture
Crying looking at your smile, holding it close to my heart
Lying in my bed, wishing this summer I can entwine my fingers with yours
And sigh deeply both in joy and sorrow combined, dreaming to be kissed by you...


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-21-2002 02:25 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-21 02:06 PM


Noah this is such a beautiful outpouring
of love and devotion to your Joanna!
I too pray that one day you will be together.
I'm sure she will love this sweetie.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2002-04-21 04:56 PM


A sacred love, expressed in pure enthrallment. Luck to you both Noah.
ThisDiamond

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3 posted 2002-04-21 04:59 PM


Pucker up sweetie! MUAH!!!
Heavenly Airlines...I like that!!! clever

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-04-21 05:25 PM


Heavenly Airlines...nice one...
I was talking to a waitress friend of mine the other day about my girlfriend and i told her that she made me feel special..something very important to me...that a woman admires me and thinks I am special...James

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5 posted 2002-04-21 05:42 PM


How I dream of holding you this summer and being married to your smile

I love it Noah dear..hugss...enjoyed your words as always

                ~Victoria

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6 posted 2002-04-21 08:14 PM


Noah - keep the faith, one day she will be with you...

BC

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7 posted 2002-04-21 08:58 PM


you love so deeply Noah...

nice thoughts

M

Suetang
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8 posted 2002-04-21 09:02 PM


Hello Noah

Your love for Joanna is so evident in all you write and this was such a beautiful outpouring of your love and devotion.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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9 posted 2002-04-21 09:21 PM


Noah, this is such a beautiful heartfelt poem. Your love shows all the way through.
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10 posted 2002-04-21 09:41 PM


And I'm seeing your smile, feeling the beating of your heart
Softly caressing the lute in your hair, playing songs of love so clear

Noah, so sweet and honest are your loving poems. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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11 posted 2002-04-21 10:17 PM


Noah, if love makes the world go round, you are a big contributing factor to the continued spin.
Luv ya
Sandra

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12 posted 2002-04-21 10:35 PM


Noah...Lovely poem to touch the heart of Joanna.  As always...you write with the passion of your heart, the passion of your soul.  ***Ivy Rose
Duncan
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13 posted 2002-04-22 12:22 PM


Know the dream...you've written it well, Noah.  Guess both of us need a little patience, huh?
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14 posted 2002-04-22 12:38 PM


Noah, You had so many phrases I loved in this poem. Your creativity is quite amazing. I hope Joanna and you get to be together soon, and I bet after that happens these pages here at Passions are gonna melt from the inspiration that comes from your pen.
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