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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Within How I long to feel your touch in the early morning hour, you fill me with your loving teaching me of love's power. Reaching deep you touch my soul as you slowly heal my heart. The special way you make love; a true gift of finest art. You awaken my senses with your touches and sweet kiss When your holding me closely your holding me in sweet bliss. I can feel your passion burn as you feed the flame of fire. You tremble me with your thoughts as you fill me with desire. Within your soul I am lost and this world does not exist; within your arms I am found and your love I can't resist. {On the wings of words our spirits fly...and our souls are free...me} Like a red brick, in a white wall somebodies brush forgot to paint... lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (04-21-2002 11:28 AM).] |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Donna~ I have missed your words, and thoughts...its sooo good to see you back posting your heart...  Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may you always find true happiness within his heart and be graced by a love bound to last forever! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-21-2002 12:11 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Within your soul I am lost and this world does not exist; within your arms I am found and your love I can't resist. ============================ it dont get much better than this does it?  lovely rhymes divine Donna...your cadence is a full of harmony as your hearts sincerety. so good to find your name here girlie!! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Donna, So that's where you've been! Welcome to reality. LOL Fabulous write.  It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Donna, You know...if you'd send me that photo album I could select your picture and we could get it posted! It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Been missing your lovely writing. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Donna darling girl, this is utterly utterly wonderful, I love the imagery and the language in this. This reads so beautifully,. Absolutely wonderful use of language and vivid pictures I really do like this. Wonderful writing utterly wonderful    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes. . . I like the flow and feeling of this one GS. . . nice to see you back. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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