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Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2002-04-07 01:02 PM

"If I follow the signs," she said
"I will find my heart."

She looked into the eyes
of brown, blue, green...yet none
had the mirror of her soul.Swaying
back and forth like the wind
in the trees, she envisioned
his soul dancing atop the leaves.
His breath mingling with her own.
Misty dawns and pastel sunsets
running the full length
of her soul.He was in the midst
of all that was beautiful.
The stars formed a path
across the night sky.They
seemed to say...follow us,
his heart is coming from afar.

And so,
she kept following the signs,
following the stars, following
a heart that was born
inside the dreams of her night.

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2002-04-07 01:04 PM

Beautifully composed Ivy Rose ... lovely imagery woven throughout, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-04-07 01:39 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautfiul, sweet friend, may she always believe in her dreams and forever dance upon the stars and embrace her love very soon through times light! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-04-07 02:12 PM

Very nice Ivy...James

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-04-07 03:57 PM

Such a dream....beautifully written Ivy...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-04-07 04:18 PM

And so,
she kept following the signs,
following the stars, following
a heart that was born
inside the dreams of her night.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Beautiful Ivy Rose!
Oh my how I love this piece!
~Sunday smiles and hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-04-07 07:07 PM

This is tenderly beautiful!

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

7 posted 2002-04-07 08:41 PM

Exquisite Ivy Rose, you do these so well. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-04-07 10:05 PM

Ivy Rose - very beautiful poem. Touching to read...

BC

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2002-04-08 02:15 PM

Love those hazel eyes

Magicmystery
Senior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2002-04-08 04:52 PM

What a beautiful story!!!

Love, Light and Peace,

Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

11 posted 2002-04-13 02:42 PM

I am starting to love this place more and more!! I seem to be able to relate more often now..and your words were just oozing with magic!!

Amazing work here, and amazing how you captured all I've been struggling with to put into words but it all is becoming a perfectly clear picture..

Kristen

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