Open Poetry #20 |
Moon by lunar in |
Streen Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 169 |
O fragrant lady of the moonstars, know this: others find man's darkbright orbed fate, from how you breathe the planets And when bright children eyes tossle feet across moonlit fields drinking birth by birth of lune-ray lune-night, others see not what I see in you they see mere light; o light, light is destitute of the heart. children eyes bright see light and path by path can trample but walk by walk they drink and as others do not stop to think, think on you. O moonlighting dove, I could close my eyes and would not lack you. I could still see sight by sight your real power. I am yet a child ere and now this day my trampling feet drink in the fields my hands clasp the moonlit swaying wheat and wildly O forever flower, I stray path by path to drink your love, (moon by lunar in) my heart. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This one left me wanting to frolic in the moonlight, and soak up some warm moonbeams. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah...the Moon Is Back... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
like a song... loved this.. K |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I am yet a child ere and now this day my trampling feet drink in the fields my hands clasp the moonlit swaying wheat and wildly O forever flower, I stray path by path to drink your love, (moon by lunar in) my heart." (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo breathtaking, sweet friend, may you always soak up the moonbeams from the smiles your love will always give you! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Derek, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice writing....I enjoyed! |
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