Open Poetry #20 |
¿Dónde Ha Ido Su Corazón? |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(Here's another one of my bi-lingual rambles! I wrote this is Spanish and the English translation is below! I'm alright, this one is just about my past and how I was trying to get through to my dad when I was abused and he ignored me, but this no longer applies to me! ) ¿Dónde Ha Ido Su Corazón? (Where Has Your Heart Gone?) By: Noah Eaton 4/20/02 A veces yo trato y registro en el registro de la propiedad literaria mi visión Pero entonces sé que mis visiones nunca pueden ser preconcebidas Trato de cambiar las órdenes Y escapa mis esperanzas y encuentra que algunos proveer Si era una parte de su cariño ¿Significa eso que usted todavía me respetaría? Estoy como un koi en una charca congelada Tratar de oírlo de bajo el azul Si yo no puedo ganar la conversación sincera Entonces yo siempre soy dejado como un tonto que sala mi ha enrollado ¿Dónde ha ido el corazón? Piso suavemente con pies descubiertos Tratar de alcanzar su mar Y solicita que su ha la atención de uninvited ¿Dónde ha ido el corazón? Son usted me va a salir como un tonto Puedo esconder pero no es la feria No es fácil ¿Dónde ha ido el corazón? Qué es el punto de llevar el corazón fuera sobre mi manga Si acaba de llover afuera y permitió sangrar Todo necesito deberá poner los pies en el suelo Y encuentra el espacio para caminar alrededor Tratar de encontrar ese recuerdo Yo nunca tuve.. Vigilo cada luna pasa Y cada aureola de un desplome de la oportunidad Usted trata mis intenciones como la policía de la cocina Sólo no hay fregadero de mantener las manos limpias ¿Dónde ha ido el corazón? Piso suavemente con pies descubiertos Tratar de alcanzar su mar Y solicita que su ha la atención de uninvited ¿Dónde ha ido el corazón? Son usted me va a salir como un tonto Puedo esconder pero no es la feria No es fácil ¿Dónde ha ido el corazón? Digo soy necesitado de su canción del consuelo Pero usted piensa su todo apenas algún fuera pasado de moda oxymoron ¿Bien no puede ver usted lo que acontece? ¿No puede ver usted lo que acontece? ¿Dónde ha ido el corazón? Piso suavemente con pies descubiertos Tratar de alcanzar su mar Y solicita que su ha la atención de uninvited ¿Dónde ha ido el corazón? Son usted me va a salir como un tonto Puedo esconder pero no es la feria No es fácil No es fácil ¿Dónde ha ido el corazón? ¿Dónde ha ido el corazón? ¿Dónde ha ido el corazón? (English Version) Sometimes I try and copyright my vision But then I know my visions can never be preconceived I'm trying to change the rules And escape my expectations and find some leverage If I was a part of your affection Does that mean that you would still respect me? I'm like a koi in a frozen pond Trying to hear you from beneath the blue If I can't win your heartfelt conversation Then I'm always left as a fool salting my wounds Where has your heart gone? I'm treading softly with bare feet Trying to reach the sea Of your uninvited attention Where has your heart gone? Are you going to leave me as a fool I can hide but it's not fair It's not easy... Where has your heart gone? What's the point of wearing my heart out upon my sleeve If it is just going to rain outside and let it bleed All I need is to put my feet on the ground And find the space to walk around Trying to find that souvenir I never had... I watch every moon elapse And every halo of an opportunity collapse You treat my intentions like kitchen police Only there is no sink to keep my hands clean Where has your heart gone? I'm treading softly with bare feet Trying to reach the sea Of your uninvited attention Where has your heart gone? Are you going to leave me as a fool I can hide but it's not fair It's not easy... It's not easy... Where has your heart gone? I say I'm in need of your comfort song But you think its all just some outdated oxymoron Well can't you see what's happening? Can't you see what's happening? Where has your heart gone? I'm treading softly with bare feet Trying to reach the sea Of your uninvited attention Where has your heart gone? Are you going to leave me as a fool I can hide but it's not fair It's not easy... It's not easy... Where has your heart gone? Where has your heart gone? Where has your heart gone? [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-21-2002 11:46 AM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, Noah, all of this heartfelt pleading, and I don't have any answers for you. Hold fast to your loving soul dear one. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Noah...be patient with love...the answers will come and you will understand...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - thanks for writing this, I've been where you have been. Peace my friend, it's out there somewhere, I have to believe it true... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Noah! I don't understand nor read Spanish but the English translation said it all. I would love to hear you read this in Spanish. ~Big Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love to you Noah, you deserve it all |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This reads like a song to me, and it sings another message other than the one you say it comes with. Forgive the plain description, but it could very well be a "lost or loosing love" poem. I'd love to hear this with some music. Geesh...very much enjoyed, Noah. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Noah, two things, Amigo: First, the instant i read the first lines of your intro, i knew you were scarred and still healing. Do you know that heavy feeling when your heart just sinks in your chest, but you suck it up anyhow, and go on? At times, there is nothing more important than the catharsis of a poem, and my empathy for your unconscienceable indifference of your dad is boundless. *sigh* Secondly, maybe its a cliche, but they also say that the best poetry is written from angst and hurt. You proved that in spades with this heartcry. and yes, my chest still lies heavy, as i write this. jkf |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hey sweetheart, Good thing you also posted this in english because I only understood bits and pieces of the spanish version. It saddens me to know that someone has treated you so wrongly....you have the most kind, caring, loving heart of anyone I know! (BIG HEARTY HUGS) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
So much angst, Noah. But I am glad this is of the past and not present. It is so well written! And I struggled with the Spanish, but am happy to say I did get the gist of it now and then. El Corazon Grande, that should be your nickname. I'm like a koi in a frozen pond "Trying to hear you from beneath the blue If I can't win your heartfelt conversation Then I'm always left as a fool salting my wounds" I hear you, hope he hears you these days. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (04-21-2002 01:23 PM).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Poetry is always the way to vent...glad to know you are better now... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Well done. At least the english version is. I can't say much for the Spanish version, it might suck... who knows. |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Estas muy hemosa, mi hermano menor. Me gusta mucho. Dios te bendigas. Tu eres un maestro con la pluma. Magnifico! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a wonderful piece of work, Noah! How proud I am of you for being able to speak two languages! I particularly like this part, quote: Congratulations on a wonderful piece of poetry! |
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