Open Poetry #20 |
A Poet's Heart |
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
A Poet's Heart Take a look through poet's eyes And see the beauty of clear skies The grace of seagull as she flies The awe, the wonder and suprise All through this poet's eyes Listen through this poet's ears To sounds that you may never hear The whisper of the warm sea air The heart that sings when you are near All through this poet's ears Feel through the touch of poet's hands The grainy roughness of white sands The dew laced tips of roses and Gentle caress on skin now tanned All through this poet's hands Know that in this poet's mind Lie memories I've left behind Of prior lives once not so kind Hid so no other soul could find Deep in this poet's mind Sense that in this poet's heart I've mended places torn apart And ripped in two by love's cruel dart To give myself a brand new start Here in this poet's heart See me through a poet's eyes As words hear whispers of the wise And touch me with a poet's hand Your mind open to understand Then promise me right from the start You'll love me with a poet's heart |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Feel through the touch of poet's hands The grainy roughness of white sands The dew laced tips of roses and Gentle caress on skin now tanned All through this poet's hands ================================= Oh I do ... I do...every day ...when I walk on the beaches of understand...here in this place I call poetry land. Love this theme and rhyme scheme Ruth-girlie...and seeing you post more often too. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"See me through a poet's eyes As words hear whispers of the wise And touch me with a poet's hand Your mind open to understand Then promise me right from the start You'll love me with a poet's heart" (smiles) Oh Ruth, this is sooooooo beautiful, yes, from one poets heart to another, we will always love you so much and we will always be here to help you when parts of your heart cry! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, you are a true angel to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ruth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Absolutely beautiful Ruth. The forum was lonely without the grace of your gentle pen. It is wonderful to read you again. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Ruth, this is incredibly beautiful. What sincere and precious meaning behind each and every verse. Well done! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes a lovely expression from the heart of a poet...James |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Ruth, this is an anthem for all poets everywhere, it's beautiful and I'm glad that you are a poet Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Ruth, this has the touch of a beautiful pen, the words that speak a thousand thoughts, from a heart that is truly from a poet. Loved it. Sincerely Rick |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Ruth, such beauty that comes from your pen. I can relate so much. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
A wonderful poem in style and content, The structure, message, and the emotions All add to the excellence. Gloom |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
These verses came from one of the most beautiful hearts I have ever known. YOu are more lovely than your poetry, and that for me has always ranked among the highest. This is so wonderful HUgs Liz |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so beautiful. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the body of the poet. . . a wonderful thing indeed. . . yes, it's nice to see your work here again. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
WONDERFUL WRITING!!!! You made a poet's haeart come alive for me. ***Ivy Rose |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What is there not to like about this lovely piece? It is quite apparent you found a second home and have shared it very, very well...thank you, Ruth! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Ruth There were so many truths in your words that I for one could so easily relate. I guess we all see inside one another's souls through our writing, a place many don't see. There are so many people in my life who don't even know I write but I feel so much comfort here at PIP and through the words of others. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Exquisite!!... ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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