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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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rural commute Cool spring air warm afternoon sun Friday the roof is open the FM is on yin and yan (got a brief message and it made my day) the rural commute is okay today ©041902 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
succint, and yet, it had a feel of a groove--hopeful anticipation and just that general "cruisin'" feel to it. Made me smile, tho I confess I felt some envy!  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I must agree with the feel of this.... Lots said in a 5 second read....enjoyed. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I really liked this. Dawn |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Krawdad Just a brief message can change the way everything looks, no matter where you are. Enjoyed this! |
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