Open Poetry #20 |
Moonlit Dawn |
Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Our love did not begin with the Sun's first rise, Nor did it start at the Sun's last set. It happened when another body filled the skies, When two poetic-crossed souls finally met. We did not know it was love just yet, But, we knew we had to take that chance. And so began this lover's vingette In the Moonlit Dawn of our Romance. It all began with a glance from the eyes. A first line spoken in this Romantic Duet Gave way to another, and another in reply. What exactly was said, I sometimes forget; But, I know it was echoed by a blue clarinet. As I took your hand for our first dance, We moved in time with that quiet quartet In the Moonlit Dawn of our Romance. Then came the sound of love's first sigh As the floor became awash in violet. The moon appeared brightly on high Like a diamond drop so softly inset Into the sky like a crystal amulet. Lighting and crossing the sky's wide expanse, Leaving only traces of our silhouettes In the Moonlit Dawn of our Romance. This is the love that Night beget, When hearts fall under Love's sweet entrance. I, your Romeo; and you, my Juliet In the Moonlit Dawn of our Romance. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
MR~ so gentle a profound statement....in awe of these words....in all their softness...thank you... Lauren~ Step through the |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! (sigh) May you always hold your Juliet close to your heart and share true loves happiness forever, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Romeo, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Gorgeous, beautifully penned ~Victoria |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Wow...superbly romantic, words can't describe the beauty. |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Well then. I wanted you to know I hadn't missed the works you posted earlier than this. So this is how it all began? Sounds like a wonderful beginning. Your heart is sweet in this. "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet" [This message has been edited by Siofra (04-19-2002 05:18 PM).] |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
tsk tsk.. this shouldn't be at the bottom. Give it another round, Love? "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words |
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