If this is a repost, please accept my apology.
This is a work before I "discovered" Senryu here at Passions

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Just the two of us
committed to each other
no reservations have we
only longing resides here
where other thoughts once called home

There is one small word
that talks only about me
and that word is "I"

I give you my life
take my heart for it is yours
I shall need it not
unconditionally yours
take tenderly to your care

Yet another word
speaks so emotionally
and that word is "love"

You give me your love
I cherish it forever
I give you my love
and you have humbled me so
you take my love as your love

There is a third word
that does not talk about we
and that word is "you"

You whom I adore
the reason for my being
you on pedestal
far above all others here
you, the woman of my dreams

Three words, I love you
what more can I say my love
I love you, I do.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Bob darling boy I think this is utterly utterly spectacular. This a truly outstandingly fabulous poem. Such simple words, combined in perfection in your marvellous and utterly unique way. Truly perfect writing, and I love it


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

InterLoper~
My 'thoughts and suggestions' are that this is wonderful ... and you should do more~
This is some-kinda-wonderful~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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