Open Poetry #20 |
Skies that Fall.. |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Ocean currents have swollen with changes migrated birds then landed on snow ranges; as you near the edge of your earthly seat before the end, think what you will meet. Will it be a sky that falls when you cross the road an angelic voice to say there was never an abode; a system failure when hard drives are installed or deeds delivered from a stranger, once impaled? Gone are the days when fallen saints walked the earth to lay down restraints, so legends go on and turbulence rises full of windy gusts and snow bank surprises. Fallen strangers pointed to meteor showers and garden experts noted abnormal flowers; told in the past, skies have already fallen before any end, shrines will just be forgotten. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-18-2002 11:17 PM).] |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Well stated, ecrivan. ~sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Martin, just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy and appreciate the way you write. You leave the reader pondering and rereading your post again and again...at least this reader does. Wonderful thoughts here. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Sky your element came in handy in the poem thanks for clicking in! Nancy, I myself get moments of inspiration..I wish some of my stuff had an even greater impact! you're comments are always welcome. Now am in the midst of preparing for performing in Montreal Fringe Festival |
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