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0 posted 2002-04-18 10:29 PM


If anyone has a better title that that, I'm open to suggestions. Thanks!

"Staying Focused"

I can't seem to focus
On what I'm supposed to do
I feel so frustrated
And I don't know what to do.
My mind has disappeared
To somewhere far away
I wonder where it went
Because I'll need it back someday.
But sometimes, something happens
That helps me to recall
The things I have forgotten
The most important of them all.
I know that God is in control
And He'll help me along
That He is always there
And will help me to stay strong.
And when I can't seem to focus
On what I'm supposed to do
I think of what God said,
"I will always be with you."


~skyshine

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1 posted 2002-04-18 10:34 PM




(smiles) Yes, yes, He will always be here for us all and His love will always prevail, all we have to do is ask and He will help us stay focused! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I think this title is perfect, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-18 10:57 PM


sky~This is perfectly beutiful!
I absolutely love it!
~Hugs~

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3 posted 2002-04-18 11:21 PM


Yes, indeed He will, Noah! Thanks for reading.

Thank you very much, Nancy!

sky

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4 posted 2002-05-25 07:10 PM



Goodness, I think you
wrote this for me...

thank you!

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5 posted 2002-05-26 10:04 AM


Nice work, Sky..You did this well, your mind is focusing good enough to write, anyway
Sandra

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (05-26-2002 10:04 AM).]

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