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Beware The Threads
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Beware The Threads |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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~Beware The Threads~ Beware of these threads he weaves They blind while souls deceive Watch the way he spins his trap Beware of his jaws they also snap Listen close to the whispered lies Clothed in gold disguised as sighs Watch which path you transverse Beware you don’t pick up the curse It’s said by those who really know You won’t know when to come or go Heed the warnings and stay away This isn’t a safe place for you to play Take my advice and stand well clear What you seek isn’t here Thrills you’ll get I’ve no doubt But who is there to hear your shout Watch the threads beware my friend Stepping close will mean your end Truth can’t save you from despite Turn away from this web of night Pay heed to the words please do This isn’t the right place for you Danger might seem like fun But the torture has only just begun Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Truly spoken for thin threads are weaved into a mighty rope. paladin |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy...you certainly have woven one here. Yes, beware the threads.... Nicely written. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Well, now, who is this spider, anyway? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
But few will listen...they will say I must find out for myself...James |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (giggles in delight) This is wonderful, sweet friend, only certain spiders creep me out but I always love the wonderful webs they make! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, this is a true tapestry of delight, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marsha - I've seen quite a transformation in your writing over the past couple of months. I like what I see... BC |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Listen close to the whispered lies Clothed in gold disguised as sighs I like this very much, Marsha. *S* Advice we all should heed... written so beautifully. *S* |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sounds like you were describing Beelzebub  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Yikes!!! This is scary. I hope you're ok! |
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