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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2002-04-18 02:31 PM

Window Thoughts

I shall take
your lines,
stains of ink on parched thought

multi-fold them

bend them this way
then fold here...

then I shall take
delight in
unfolding them,

holding now sharp
corners up to the
window

letting light seep through

your deepest thoughts

while you watch from over there
as I let light seep through
this sheerest veil

and I may have to wet
my fingertip

just so

with just this

so that a fingerprint of me
remains

on your tip
of mind

your tongue
has already tasted
my salt

in the wounds still bleeding

and when I turn
I shall fold into you,
for the light of the window
let me seep to where
I want to be

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-04-18 02:39 PM

perhaps the panes are showing....

nicely done my friend...

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-04-18 03:04 PM

Dear Decca....you are bending the light...and it resonates off us like summer's sun...I'm tanner already...
or perhaps singed

very very nice............... *sigh* *whew*

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-04-18 03:15 PM

(smiles) I love this, sweet friend, I too can envision me sitting in my living room watching light shine through the sunroof and reflect on, this is wonderful! (sigh) May you always enfold into lifes sweetest pleasures, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2002-04-18 03:21 PM

Deca

So delicate, yet tantalizing. Wonderfully done!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2002-04-18 04:08 PM

can see the sun through your veil
as you dance there
making finger prints on the glass

smiling wicked at the window washer
that waits to go again..

flirty and fun with sensual nice work

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-04-18 04:30 PM

My oh my Deca!! You are simmering girlie!
WOW! At a loss for words here....
I'm keeping this!

~Hugs~

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