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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-04-18 12:52 PM

In a quiet reflection
while I was reading
pages of you & I,
you touched softly
my cheek, brushing
your lips to mine
silent room, a moment,
filled with tears, my eyes

love, simple in form
~~~~~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-18-2002 12:53 PM).]

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-04-18 12:53 PM

Lauren,
True to form...your writing always touches my heart. So very well done.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-04-18 12:54 PM

GreenEyes~
How could one not be drawn in by the title ?
And the pages are delicately flipped revealing such beautiful thoughts~

You are such a wonderful lady of sharing~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

3 posted 2002-04-18 12:55 PM

This...is wonderful.
Thank you for Sharing...

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2002-04-18 02:11 PM

so much said...(and felt)in so few perfectly whispered sighs...beautiful poetess L...have missed your soft offerings.

how about how good it feels to finally forgive you
~~~
the moment I jumped off of it ... was the moment I touched down.

~Alanis Morissette~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2002-04-18 02:15 PM

Beautiful!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-04-18 02:44 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile and have these pages blushing with laughter and thought! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2002-04-18 04:35 PM

simply Lauren. . .

wonderful. . .

---------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-04-18 07:25 PM

Greeneyes - and love in it's simplest form is the best of all.

BC

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

9 posted 2002-04-18 07:42 PM

wonderfully simple and a touch sentimental, no? with the notebook image in mind as you try to transcribe romantic senses, nice!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-04-18 07:53 PM

Simply passionately beautiful!

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

11 posted 2002-04-18 08:47 PM

silent room, a moment,
filled with tears, my eyes

love, simple in form

This is simply beautiful, Lauren

~many simple hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

12 posted 2002-04-18 08:49 PM

Beautifully done, Lauren.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

13 posted 2002-04-18 10:51 PM

The softest of whispers, the loudest of tears ...
... silent only to those unknown.

These such tears seem flavored sweet.
It is truly good to read you once more.

Keith Morgan
Member

since 2001-10-29

Posts 114
Md

14 posted 2002-04-18 10:54 PM

beautiful, and heartfelt!!!!!

Write from the soul and the words will flow

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

15 posted 2002-04-18 10:55 PM

A reflection as gentle as a whisper....
beaufully expressed Lauren.
~Hugs~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

16 posted 2002-04-19 12:38 PM

Larry~

Thank you, I appreciate your thoughts and kindness always...

~~

Marge~

thank you my friend, I am reliving
a happier time....

~~

Soleil Noir~

Thanks for stopping by, I enjoyed your thoughts...

~~

Janet Marie~

I have a world of notebooks to read and write, thank you for always being there to view....

~~

Chris~

thanks much!

~~

Noah~

thank you sweet noah....for your comments of kind....

~~

Sven~

simply thank you...

~~

Bill~

it is that simple sometimes isnt it....thank you for reading....

~~

Martin~

Just a touch, sometimes thats all we need right? I've been reading too much lately....thanks...

~~

Lyra~

GOOD to see you here.....enjoyed your words, much....

Lone Wolf~

THANKS!
~~

Craig~

I missed seeing you, so glad you are back....

~~

Keith~

very heart felt, thank you...I love your quote too....NICE

~~

Nancy~

thank you for stopping by, I always smile when I see your name...HUGSSSS

HUGSSS and Love to all.....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

17 posted 2002-04-19 07:18 PM

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